31.3.07

ReDefiNiNG DefiNiTioNs


Come on let’s ride
Out of this circle of life
Out of reality’s mime
Out of the definitions of time

Let’s enter the pages
Of our favourite tale and places
Let’s fall in love again and again
Let’s gift our love an “ever after” frame

Let’s just walk the yellow road
To ask for wings from the wizard of oz
Then let’s make love on cloud number nine
Composing a poem in live prose

Let’s sit together on the moon’s curve
Let’s play hide and seek among stars in love
Let’s leave behind the sands of time
Let’s enter the sea of tranquil tides

Let’s just lock our embrace
Then just throw the keys away
Let us bind together to rise and to fall
Let’s live a dream that’s unknown to all

Let’s see what only we together can see
Let’s feel what only we together can feel
Let’s make a clock of our own fate
Let us make time and tide wait

Let’s give new meanings to love
Let’s make God reveal his verve
Let’s explore the world again
Let’s write history again


Let’s eternalise all our rhymes insane
Let’s create a vision that remains
In a land devoid of time frames
Let’s define definitions again…………..

6 comments:

  1. Brilliant!! Liked the flow of thoughts. Jus slided like drops of honey:) Absolutely smooth!! Simply awesome!!!

    Keep it rollin;)

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  2. somehow i credit it as my favourite love poem...hehehe thank u...

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  3. The words rhyme, the imagery's fine..
    But some discordant note mars its beauty.. Or perhaps adds to it, depending on how you perceive it. Is the feeling genuine, or is it a random creation?
    Or maybe you shouldn't answer this after all... Like the arms of Venus de Milo......

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  4. hmm..a dschordant note.....it wud b nice if u'll tell me wat it is.....why hide ur name....neway ur choice....nd i m highly confused...venus de milo lost her arms right....do u mean its open to interpreattion....nd i feel tht this came frm feelings coz it was the first time i actually put my feelings to paper for my love

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  5. Open to interpretation is a crude way of putting it. Venus De Milo's true beauty lies in it's mystery.. What were her arms, after all....

    If you ask for specifics, I can't give any... When I said there's a discordant note, I just said what I felt on reading it.....

    As for my name,that's no secret...The link points to my profile, after all...

    Ciao...

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  6. hmm..!!!
    gravity is lower here...
    not in terms of mot justes or cognitive content but in terms of the feel...beautiful..redifining definations...no doubt..
    for the first time i am feeling the levity..
    loved this one...!!

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